Wednesday, June 1, 2011

I still count

Do you ever feel invisible?
 At times it happens to all of us.

We just want to shout out

HELLO!
I'm still here!

So I wrote this little verse below.
I feel better now!



 
 i still count

sometimes it's necessary to stand out
to be different
to shout

damn it!
i count!

i’m here
do you
see

what i’m
truly meant to
be

i may be old
i may be gray
but baby oh baby
i’m here to stay

one more day
one more year
one more ride

and only one
gear

that keeps me movin’
and rockin’ and
grovin’

I may be shakey
I may be breaky

but baby oh baby
there’s no maybe

i’m still here
rockin’ and
a grovin

so give a cheer out
when you see
me about

i may be old
but I still
count

: : :

linking with Lisa at The Creative Exchange



19 comments:

lisa said...

This is absolutely beautiful Reena, and the photograph you chose for it is equally so.
i think you're right in that we all feel this way at times, but for me there is the flip side...sometimes when things are really hectic, just wanting to be invisible for just a little while!! :-)

Thank you so much for sharing this today at The Creative Exchange.

Have a wonderful evening!

lisa.

texwisgirl said...

sweet! :) and i also agree with lisa's comment that it's nice to fade into the background too these days...

(i have to look up my butterflies and my wildflowers, but i've found some great Texas sites for both...) :)

beth said...

those lyrics are GREAT. you could submit them somewhere, as i could totally see them in a song :)

Julie Musil said...

Wow, that was beautiful!

Catherine said...

Very fun! Now... if we just set it to some music you would have a great country song!!! :)

Fun post!
xo Catherine

Louisiana Belle said...

Reena, that is so good! Love the words and the meaning behind them. You GO girl!! LOL

Leontien said...

Heeeee that's my bike!!!

;-)

and i love your little poem!

Thanks
Leontien
www.fourleafcloverdairy.blogspot.com

Pat said...

Wonderful poem and sentiment! That's a great-looking bike!

Mary said...

Fabulous -- picture and poem both!

Mental P Mama said...

Oh yes you do! Wonderful!

Judy said...

That is awesome! I agree with Beth, that could be a song.

Tracy said...

I truly feel like that on some days...and I think that's why blogging is so important to me becuase there are always blog friends who acknowledge me and give me that validation.
YES, you count; I'm here to tell you!

Kerri said...

EXCELLENT!!! I definitely feel this way sometimes!

Daryl said...

Oh my yes indeed . stand up, be proud and make 'em take notice .. like that awesome bike!

Tracey of These Nine Acres said...

Love the photo and the words! Well done, my friend! And yes, we all count!

S. Etole said...

I've been missing my moments here ... out of town company has kept me busy. Your photos are always entrancing.

faye said...

Hi.. thanks for stopping by my blog
via Daryl .. is she awesome or what ??
Love your poem and that bike is really
picture perfect.. I photograph a lot of bikes
and I wouldn't have passed this one by without
a few shots.

Pieces of Sunshine said...

Wow! Great photo, brilliant colours.

Raining Iguanas said...

MM, this was a pleasant surprise. Enjoyed your writing and your photo very much. -RI